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1F推:十刑那段 真的很沒有霸氣,和仔很貪心,想寫三條線,05/14 00:36
2F→:三條線有各自的故事,各自的鋪成,可是卻連不成一氣,05/14 00:37
3F→:感覺就像在寫每個極短篇,篇篇不錯,串起來味道就都怪怪05/14 00:38
4F→:怪的,少了什麼。太刻意強調背後的刻畫,卻少了真正該有05/14 00:38
5F→:有的主線。05/14 00:38
1F推:同意 鋪成的後段 收的不好05/13 02:44
2F推:花了時間寫 狂刀 星星 森林,卻是草草當雜魚收掉,05/13 02:46
3F→:相對的天武部分卻是一拖再拖。05/13 02:47
4F推:改機大萬歲05/03 19:03
5F推:白龍改機大04/20 14:03
1F推:歡迎改機大04/13 20:37
5F推:1496318171 From: 貼吧04/06 00:51
18F→:如果真的只幹掉一個聖王,真的他X的弱。03/22 17:35
4F→:如果是這樣可能就是我記錯了02/24 11:25
7F推:如果是這樣可能就是我記錯了02/24 11:25
2F推:推改機大12/08 22:07