Re: [心得] 完全主觀編劇群排名
個人覺得申呈山的確有他的才能在,不過綜觀下來,會發現他所寫的角色,其中比
較有人在討論的,風格辨識度其實不高。
南風:偏執->行為有對有錯->悔悟->領了個悲情的便當
戢武王:偏執->行為有對有錯->悔悟->領了個悲情的便當
無衣師尹:偏執->行為有對有錯->悔悟->領了個悲情的便當
為什麼會覺得他的人性描寫深刻複雜,就是在”行為有對有錯”這項,末了便
當又領得華麗慘澹,自然讓人印象深刻。
乍看之下,這一連串的過程會有如萬花筒景象般使人眼花撩亂,覺得寫得很好,
可是仔細觀察會發現,”行為有對有錯”這邊到”領了個悲情的便當”的轉折,
其實諸多不合理強牽之處,南風個人覺得還算描寫得不錯,並無特別不合理;
戢武王就不用說了,版上早已諸多抨擊文章;
無衣師尹雖然沒有戢武王這樣的明顯,但仍存在許多牽強,
比如說這幾天對他”無奈”的質疑,也就是因此而來。
簡單來說,申的角色定義就是好跟壞參雜(素還真就不討論了,這個可能對他來說
意義特別),
這中間的轉折描寫,雖可以看得出申盡心之處,也不能否認申的用心跟才能,
但實話說,可能還要再磨練,才能更圓滑深刻,也才能寫得出他原本預定的人物特性,
而不是像現在這般感覺近於虛假的”複雜”,
也不是用一些華麗詞藻去作包裝的”深度”,
畢竟到最後,戲迷看得出當中虛實深淺的。
但不由得不說,申的便當總是寫得豐盛好吃,這點個人還蠻肯定。
每個編劇都有寫得不好時,也有爛尾時,也有被”天意”修改時,
但程度如何,一看便知。
相比三弦,他的劍聖、寂寞侯、香獨秀、羅喉、魔王子…等,
哪一個會讓人覺得這些角色其實都差不多的感覺?
這就是功力。
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