Re: [寫作班]第二週 找工作計劃 nanochen
※ 引述《nanochen (English)》之銘言：
: My plan for finding a job
---Your background---
: I am currently a 5th year Ph. D. student and expect to
: graduate next May. It is about time for me to find a job.
---Your expectation for a job
: Even I already interviewed with several companies, I am
: still interested in being a postdoctoral researcher in
: a university after graduation.
: I would like to go to some areas which are different from
^^^^^^^^^^ what areas? please be more specific..
: what I am working during my Ph.D. thesis. It would be
: advantageous if I can expand my research areas. Joining
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
again. plz specify "what"do you do now
and plan to do "what" in the future
so that's why you have to make "what" plan
: a bigger group would be a preferred choice for me.
--Your plan for a job---
: The things I need to do are to prepare my CV, to ask for
: the recommendation letters, and to practice my talks.
^^^^^^^^ what talk?
: Time seems not enough and I have to hurry. Hope I can get
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Time is fleeting so I need to arrange my time more effetviely.
: an ideal position.
Chinese in the following:
親愛的版友你好：
以下是小小建議，僅供參考。
這篇作文的文法與文字都很流暢，
但是讀不出明確的"計畫細節"是什麼，以及"為何"要做這些計畫
My "plan" for finding a "job"
你想要的找的"job"是什麼呢？ 可以提供更多細節嗎？
為了找這份工作要如何"finding"?
而你為了找到這個"job"所需要做的"plan"又是什麼呢？
除了1. CV ，2. recommendation letter ，3.talk (什麼talk?工作的溝通能力嗎？)
還有其他嗎？
這個部分會是這篇文章最主要的重點，請多加描述。
大家好認真學英文～
我也要加加油
加油 ^__^
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