Re: [寫作班第五周]颱風-mingtai
※ 引述《mingtai1 (snake)》之銘言：
: Typhoons, which are usually formed in summer and autumn, are typical natural
: disasters that strike Taiwan about 5 times in average every year. Unlike
: tornados or hurricanes which cause disasters mainly by their strong wind,
^, with winds
我想這裡應該要用with,
by常用在被動句
example:
If something was done by hand, someone did it with his or her hands.
: typhoons usually carry a huge amount of water onto the land, sometimes
: coupled with strong wind as well. Hence, typhoons usually cause serious
: floods. Furthermore, the vegetation in Taiwan is not protected well and
: landslides are very likely to occur whenever typhoons bring much
: water.
: Nevertheless, typhoons can also fill up the dams so that there will
: be enough water storage for future usage. Despite of these serious issues,
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前幾篇Hibaby寫到的方法(跳躍式思考那串)，用條列式再更改順序，在這裡就很有用。
這邊既然寫說 "[Despite] these serious issues..."
那麼在這一句之前應該都是負面的影響。
所以 "Nevertheless, typhoons can also fill up the dams..." 應該挪到後面。
: some students or office workers like strong typhoons since it is likely that
: strong wind enforce the government to announce suspension of schools and
^^^^^^^
另一位板友的文章中也出現過enforce的錯誤用法，這似乎是個挺普遍的錯誤。
enforce是"執法"的"執"，進行enforce這個動作的人或物是the government，受詞是事
example:
The government enforces the law.
The government enforces freedom of speech.
The govenrment enforces the suspension of schools.
不用在法律方面的時候，規則還是一樣
example:
I enforce my rights as a citizen.
The Visual Basic compiler enforces explicit variable declaration.
: offices.
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