[疑問] 想請大家幫個忙
因為我有一堂課英文聽講，老師要大家上台介紹一個事物三分鐘
於是我想介紹老師給大家認識
剛剛寫好了介紹稿，只是英文不好的我一定有很多錯誤
希望大家能幫我指正一下
My Favorite Singer Cheer
Today,I want to introduce my favorite singer,Cheer. Her chinese name is 陳綺
貞. She is a creationary singer,she always take guitar and play it,then she
write songs and lyrics by herself,sometimes,she can write songs for other
singer to sing. Cheer published 4 albums and lots of vocal recitals,and
they're welcomed with open arms! Many people think she as a angel when she
performed on stage. Once,a famous people,伍佰 said “Cheer's song just is
like a picture”.
Cheer like to take photo and travel around the world to arouse
inspiration,so the famous songs “Travel is meaningful” was born. She also
like to write,and she has been published a book. Sometimes,she can write some
articles and post on her blog. Her write style is simple,and her word is just
like my life. She is a simple life advocate,she said “Do what you want to
do,and make it have value.” I agree the sentence very much.
Last year,when I studying book to prepare test,I always listen to the
Cheer's music. We studied together,and song our feeling of life. I love her
voice. Cheer's voice make me feel comfortable,her song very fit to listening
in midnight
I love Cheer,very much. Hope you like her,too.
And then,I'll play some track of “Travel is meaningful' for you.
我真的英文很差><...
請大家多多指正 （可以偷偷的笑我沒關係 > <".... 我很努力寫了）
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